On
the Move
Thom Gunn
v English poet who was praised for his early verses. He
was associated with the movement, looser, free verse style
v His verse became
increasingly bold in its exploration of drugs, homosexuality and poetic form
v His verse is known for its
adroit, terse language and counterculture themes.
v Bohemian lifestyle in
San Francisco
v Interested in syllabics
and free verse
v The movement was term
coined by JD Scott, literary editor of The Spectator, to describe a group of writers including
Philip Larkin, Kingsley Amis, Donald Davie, D J Enright, John Wain, Elizabeth
Jennings, Thom Gunn and Robert Conquest
v To these poets poetry
meant simple sensuous traditional and dignified form, Two anthologies of The
movement poets :
v Poets of 1950s, New
Lines
Poetry
collection
• The
sense of movement
• My
sad captain
• Touch
• Moly
• Jack
Straw’s castle
• The
passage of joy
POEM
The
blue jay scuffling in the bushes follows
Some
hidden purpose, and the gust of birds
That
spurts across the field, the wheeling swallows,
Has
nested in the trees and undergrowth.
Seeking
their instinct, or their poise, or both,
One
moves with an uncertain violence
Under
the dust thrown by a baffled sense
Or
the dull thunder of approximate words.
• Thomas
Gunn in this stanza compares human beings particularly gangs with the birds.
The blue jay which scuffles in the bushes has some hidden need in doing so. The
group of birds those are flying across the fields has some intention. The
swallows have their nests in trees and low level bushes. Every bird has been guided
by instinct or according to their need and purpose. Now he brings these gangs
into the poem saying 'One moves with an uncertain violence' which means one is
going very fast on bike raging violence as it may lead to accidents. The
motorist is driving crazily Like this first stanza provides contrasting nature
of human beings with the birds and the craziness for speed are described.
On
motorcycles, up the road, they come:
Small,
black, as flies hanging in heat, the Boys,
Until
the distance throws them forth, their hum
Bulges
to thunder held by calf and thigh.
In
goggles, donned impersonality,
In
gleaming jackets trophied with the dust,
They
strap in doubt – by hiding it, robust –
And
almost hear a meaning in their noise.
In this
stanza, Thomas Gunn wants to project a picture of long shot to close shot of
motorcycle gangs coming from a long and top of the road to nearer. He describes
as if he is closely monitoring them. He sees gangs coming. He compares them to
flies. When he sees them in a long distance they appear as small creatures like
flies in black color as they have worn the black jackets hanging in heat. This
is what he assumes when he see gangs in distance. Then the distance throws them
to come further, (means as they come near) the distance sound of humming turns
into thunder sound with the razing sounds emanated from vehicles. He says they
are driving them 'held by calf and thigh'. They wear goggles not be disturbed
by the dust emanated from their vehicles. He calls them impersonalities. The shining
jackets are turned into dusty and he is saying that the jackets are trophied
with the dust. Their sound is unbearable but they can hear meaning in the
created noise.
Exact
conclusion of their hardiness
Has no shape
yet, but from known whereabouts
They ride,
direction where the tyres press.
They scare a
flight of birds across the field:
Much that is
natural, to the will must yield.
Men
manufacture both machine and soul,
And use what
they imperfectly control
To dare a
future from the taken routes.
• In
this stanza, Thomas Gunn explains how they are disturbing and the repercussions
of the scientific inventions. He says that there is no fatigue affecting them
in their journeys. They do not know where they are going. They do not know
where they will stay. The swallows have nests but these motorists do not have
shelter at least like them. They travel in the way. They travel in ways where
their vehicles can go. They travel without purpose and at the same time they
fear the birds which are flying across the fields. These birds follow their
instincts and needs but these gangs are against it. Their destination is not
known to them. Thomas Gunn is referring scientific inventions especially
machines. He says that men made machines as well as their personalities. He says
men are using what they cannot use perfectly and they control it imperfectly.
They only consider their present, leaving the future to the fate.
It
is a part solution, after all.
One
is not necessarily discord
On
earth; or damned because, half animal,
One
lacks direct instinct, because one wakes
Afloat
on movement that divides and breaks.
One
joins the movement in a valueless world,
Choosing
it, till, both hurler and the hurled,
One
moves as well, always toward, toward.
• Thomas
Gunn is referring the state of the bike men. He uses the word 'half animal'. He
says that they lack the instinct and without any purpose they move on without
any destination and target. They only love present going speed. It is violent
speed disturbs the flight of birds and the human beings who are with
destination. The speed attracts accidents and a loss respectively. He says that
no one sleep as he is saying ' one wakes afloat on movement'. One(Motorbike
gang) lives in this world without values. There is no need of destination for
them. It is always travelling towards.
A
minute holds them, who have come to go:
The
self-defined, astride the created will
They
burst away; the towns they travel through
Are
home for neither bird nor holiness,
For
birds and saints complete their purposes.
At
worst, one is in motion; and at best,
Reaching
no absolute, in which to rest,
One
is always nearer by not keeping still.
• Thomas Gunn is
explaining how these bike men travel and where they would leave to. They sit
astride and speed up their vehicles to unknown destiny. He used 'self denied'
in this stanza to refer the gangs. They travel through towns where there no
nests for birds and homes of holiness. It is because saints and birds have
purposes. They travel in that direction. But, these speedy motor gangs do not
have purpose, Hence they are travelling away from them. They say they should be
on the move always. They want to enjoy the speed without any intention. They
are marred with dust. These do not bother them. They are at their worst while
they are on the move. They are in continuous motion. Thus they are always
nearer to the final rest (death).
ANALYSIS
• A celebration of black
jacketed motorcyclists
• Subtitle : “on the move
man, you gotta go”
• This is the intended
words to describe the lifestyle of motorcycle gangs of 1950s who are by
products of altering civilization and inventions spurted in the given periods.
• Thom Gunn in his poems
describes the lifestyle of these gangs and provides a message through this
attempt.